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Once a queen, is now deposed
Cast away, in the forest, deep
Left to linger, in eternal sleep
Ashen faced, she disapproves
Of a body that no longer moves
Dressed in burial clothes, she lies
Refusing to ever close her eyes
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Photo via Pixabay CC0
romethetown said:
I just love this poem.
Perfect diction.
Perfect rhyme.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you so very much! 🙂
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Poet Rummager said:
Ah, she fought death even into the very last moment; refusing to close her eyes. WOW!!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Yep, she was never giving in!
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~M said:
Perfectly rhymed! 😉
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much, Michelle! 🙂
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~M said:
You’re welcome Dorinda! 💜
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dornahainds said:
Brava.. 🌹🌹🌹
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you! 🙂 Taking a bow
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KaylaB said:
I am in love with this poem! It will be amazing to repost during Samhain on my blog site, with your permission of course!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Of course, reblog away 🙂 Thank you very much, Kayla! ❤
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KaylaB said:
Awesome, I’ve saved the page link so I can find it in the fall! Thank you ❤
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Wonderful, I look forward to it! Thank you, again! ❤
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