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a blank space, echoes of an
empty mind, no comfort
comes of it, nothing but
a longing, for something
For someone, to comfort
me, hold me, and remind me
everything will be okay, four
simple words, for me, a
complex piece, in which
the puzzle, missing a corner
Can never be
Completed, or
Whole
Michael33 said:
I found the comfort… when the echoes of my empty mind found yours… staring out the window… where the blank space where I lingered… was suddenly filled with the missing piece of the puzzle… that we are never alone in our mindless wanderings… in our searching within the wonder of what makes us whole… We always find the missing piece of the puzzle in the most unlikely of places… Thank you for your inspiration…
Beautifully written in wonderment…
Hope your day is filled with beautiful moments and the realization that the missing pieces of the puzzle may be closer to you than you think…
Michael
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Amen to that, Michael!!
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oldsoulwrites said:
Wonderful, beautifully written. 😍
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you!! 🙂
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dornahainds said:
Oh! And wonderful! 🌹🌹🌹
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you, Dorna! 🙂
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lyncrain said:
I love the connection at the end relating to a puzzle, beautifully written.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much, Lyn 🙂
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