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#poetry, darkness, despair, dorindaduclos.com, fantasy, Friday Fantasy, moon, moonlight, mystery, night, Night Owl Poetry, open window, poems, shadows, stars, The Empty Room
Shine on me
Enraptured,
In your fantasy
Shadowed face,
Mysterious glow
Illuminate,
An open window
Allow the night
To sail inside
As stars,
Together,
Slowly glide
Yes, brighten up
A world of gloom
I feel inside
This empty room
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Photo via Pixabay
Erika Kind said:
The moon and you…. always an experience, Dorinda!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
My very favorite, Erika…I am the Moon Child 🙂
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Erika Kind said:
You totally appear like that to me 💖
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selah said:
your poem drew me in, it felt like I was inside looking out..
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Or where you outside, looking in? 🙂 Thank you, Selah!
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selah said:
I was outside looking in before I read the poem but in reading it, it took me inside looking out.. to me it was quite a personal poem..
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Dorinda Duclos said:
I’m happy you could relate your feelings to it. That makes me feel very good 🙂
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thespiritkeepers said:
Breathtaking poetry and well done. Love the image as well. Both are in the twining of words.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you so very much, Joseph! Always appreciate your beautiful comments xo
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thespiritkeepers said:
You’re welcome. You are deserving of the words 🙂
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Dorinda Duclos said:
😊
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