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A rose reflects, time passes by
Seconds tick, with no reason why
Midnight approaches, stands still and then
Begins its same path, over again
When petals wilt, the memories, forlorn
My lonely heart bleeds, cut by a thorn
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Bushka said:
Super metaphor…..’Time bleeds’….. 😉 Hugs! ❤
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much!! Hugs! ❤
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thelonelyauthorblog said:
Beautiful
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you, Drew 🙂
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thelonelyauthorblog said:
I read a lot of poetry today from different blogs. This post was my favorite of the day. Be well.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Wow, that just made my day! Thank you, again 🙂
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Erika Kind said:
The pain of waiting… and waiting…
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Not so much the waiting, as the understanding of being forgotten…
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Erika Kind said:
Oh well, right. Actually I meant that waiting and seeing that it won’t end….But you said it much better now!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you! I suppose it could have several different meanings, depending on your perspective 🙂
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Erika Kind said:
As I perceive your writing it always leaves enough room for the reader to go into their own section in your direction …I hope that makes senses…. lol
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Yes, it makes perfect sense. Thank you for saying so!! 🙂 ❤
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Erika Kind said:
😁😁
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valerie-the-escapist said:
Beautifully written 👌👌
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much 🙂
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